Light of Life (Senryu)

Have come long distance

Looking for the light of life

That my love provides

Author's Note

When in doubt go Senryu

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

Amazing, I can relate myself to Ur Poem. Love can give U anything, Lovely write!

[Willard Wells]

Love is my reason to exist. Thank you again for reading a.nd commenting on my work

[Destiny Dreamer]

U are WELCOME! :)

[Marie]

Okay. But I've got an idea. Would "Which my love provides" work better for the last line?

[Willard Wells]

I will chew on that a bit Marie. It would work, but on first read it does not to me change much, so I will read a few more times and see if I get the feel of it. Thank you for the suggestion and your time.

[Willard Wells]

Marie when your right your right. i am changing it. And I think I am using Which. Inquiring minds want to know.