Angel In Life

Angel In Life

A Poem by Willard Wells
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True Love

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Lying in bed with a book

Reading to bring me relief
At peace with life
Feel so relaxed, I know I will sleep

The hour grows late
My love comes to bed
Truly at peace with life
Feel so relaxed, I know I will sleep

She moves up close
Snuggles up tight
At peace with life
So relaxed, I know I will sleep

As she touches my body
And drifts off 
Now truly at peace with life
So relaxed, that I drift off to sleep

She's my angel in life that brings me peace

© 2017 Willard Wells


Author's Note

Willard Wells
Minor re write removing some words that I felt were not needed.

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To have one at your side that brings you peace gives cause to cherish that special "someone"! It is a gift to be able to find serenity in the midst of the storms of life!
May your earth angel be ever with you!!
I like the repetition of the phrases of peace.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sheila for your words and yes I am very lucky. The storm is never near me when my love is... read more
Sheila Kline

9 Years Ago

She is your harbor of calm and safety - beautiful!!
Williard: Think it's simply lovely; I enjoyed the repeating phases which emphasize your heartfelt emotions: And feel so relaxed, I know I will sleep. It's sweet sentiment and you avoided the clique "love" poem, which probably as an after-thought a clique. It flows well and the love you expressed in the poem is delightful. You have wrote in the universal language of love, and comparison to an angel is beautiful. I love and believe in angels, they do walk among us....Thank you so very much...Dale

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Thank you Dale. I appreciate the kind words. I write often of the clique "love", but I try to tie so.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

You're welcome and right about angels...always with me. So thankful to God. I'll will read more; a.. read more
Another beautiful ode to angels, may she continue to bring you peace and inspiration. Thank you for sharing this!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Thank you Day. She must be my angel because the peace she brings me is beyond what I expected in hea.. read more
This just put a smile on my face. Very beautifully written.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Thank you Aries i appreciate your taking time to read my work. I am glad you smiled. I cannot ask fo.. read more
Id like to clarify that last part of my review after the words Nice poem. I was referring to the word sleep. I just looked back at it and it sounds like I was talking about the poem in general. The poem is fine. Just wanted to clear that up. :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

I never took it any other way. I don't ruffle that easy if at all. In reality I just made some chang.. read more
You've shared a feeling you had that made you happy. There's nothing wrong with that. You're a lucky guy and I envy you. I personally would not repeat the same word too much, as in this case the word sleep. For example: ...And feel so relaxed, that I drift off as well. Nice poem. Of course, I can see someone liked it so use your own judgement. :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Some of these I write and step back and see. Some I like don't fair so well and ones I don't like f.. read more
Relic

9 Years Ago

No problem Willard. I go back and revise all the time. Writing is never finished, its abandoned as o.. read more
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I really like this, I feel like I can relate. There's nothing like sleeping next to your significant other, suddenly the world around you melts away. You can sleep more peacefully than you usually would alone. Great poem, pen on!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Thank yo Lim, I appreciate your reading my work and commenting. And yes it is the place to be to fin.. read more
Really wonderful repetition and half-rhymes. Hope this lovely woman read this :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

I read it to her as she sat next to me and touched my arm. And smiled and laughed in her bashful way.. read more
Well penned!
if you have an angel present peace is definitely in the mix:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Yes i have an angel present and it bring peace to the valley, my heart and luckily my brain. She is .. read more
Very well written sir. Very touching and very deep.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

I woke this morning leaving her sleeping as I started reading and writing and having coffee. Thought.. read more
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Darren K. Jackson

9 Years Ago

I've often found the same thing, when I first wake or about to fall asleep. It seems to be these tim.. read more

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Willard Wells
Willard Wells

Sacramento, CA



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