Who's Driv'in???

Just Taken Directions

When I write

When I photo shoot

When I ride my Bike

When I fly a kite

My brain tells me what to write

My brain tells me what to shoot

My brain tells me where to ride

My brain tells me when to take flight

My brain tells me up

My brain tells me down

My brain tells me right

My brain tells me left

Is that RIGHT? NO LEFT?

I do these many things

As I sort for things

Some are found things

Some are lost things

I get advise

I don't give advise

I like advise

But it's my brains DEVISE

Sometime I want to drive???? Please???

But I have to remember

Which is left 

and

Which is right

Reviews

[Jen]

I like this, its a good example of all the chatter we have going on in there. We can always take the wheel and drive, just watch out for those tricky road signs that might lead you down wrong way!

[Willard Wells]

Jen I think you are on to something there. I do watch out not to go to far down the dark garden path so as not to be lost forever. My daughter calls it noise and until she said that I had never really considered naming it. Thank you for reading my work.. It is greatly appreciated,

[Jen]

You are most welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i don't feel i am ever driving when i write...i am only the passenger riding shotgun...the muse drives and i just go along for the ride...she turns right and i write.

[Willard Wells]

I know I am not alone in this type of action, it just seems that often people fear admitting that they are not in control all the time. I for one enjoy the adventure. Like my "Roller Coaster" poem. I am driven often and it can be fun once you accept it. Only when you try to analyze it does it become an issue.

[JayceeC]

Are you and your brain arguing again, Willard. PSST let me tell you a secret..it's really your brain fighting itself...there is no you without your brain. Think of it as the circuits being jammed...or a traffic jam and find alternative routes...LOL cut write my friend.

[Willard Wells]

Thanks for the review and it is just my way of handling the traffic, noise etc.. The alternative route is not always available and in may be dark in that room. I must bring light to it.

[Jesse]

Again, you are quite bright in writing poetry. Very nice! The brain....I consider it a RAM for a much bigger Entity that we are. :)

[Willard Wells]

I consider my brain many things, but only when it allows me to know. Thank you for your kind words and taking time to read my work.

[E G TEN]

Hey cool write my friend, I wrote something similar to this its called "Yield first, before turning write" :-) your doing a lot of things in this piece ,, you should just focus on two to three things and then play with it :-)

[Willard Wells]

Ah yes my friend to focus on one thing, a process my cerebral cortex does not relate to. My brain and I often seem to be at odds of where I should be so the focus for me is an elusive surprise. Sorry just goofy now, or more than normal. Thank you for the review and I am glad you find it enjoyable.