Waking (Senryu)

Alive on Waking

                

Sunrise Clouds fill sky

            You Wake to light of any kind

Give thanks you're alive.

Author's Note

Rewrite to Senryu

Reviews

[JayceeC]

lovely poem and a lovely picture.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you JC as always Sweet princess.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Simple words, but very powerful and wise. We should look to nature whenever we feel negative emotions, it teaches us to appreciate life more.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for reading. Much appreciated.

[~]

An inspirational poem. I really liked your message and I like the picture! Keen eye!!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you kind young lady and thank you for taking time to read it.

[lonewolf225]

Nice! I like how you make the reader think with the last line "be thankful you're alive" as to say don't take your life for granted. Love the piece and looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up!!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you very much for taking time to read my work and comment. I am glad it translated well to you. I look forward to your review of my other work, but be warned I am all over the place. Not sure if I have a particular direction in my writing. Really I am not always sure how much I personally control my work. Bring emotions and happiness are my goal. A smile means a lot.

[AaronFreitas]

Nice write... so much beauty in this state... I love walking out at night... I live in the country surrounded by grandfathers almond orchards... and look out into the clear beautiful sky! Gotta love Cali!

[Willard Wells]

Thanks for checking the update. Less words. Still got beer left? I'm kinda thirsty.

[Lizardo]

I swar, I like to go outside my house in the morning and see how the sun rises
You really described that feeling here, I thank god for being another day alive and watch the source of energy that runs our world rise to the sky.
Really awesome Poem, I really like this!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for reading my simple piece. I am happy you enjoyed it.