This somehow reminded me of my schooldays... there is a serenity in these words, a calmness that attempts to rise above all the ugliness we see around to manifest itself as the greater truth. I loved this. The graphics is gorgeous! How did you do this? This a quite unique and creative way of writing that render a greater meaning to the words!
I love this poem, love is all we need to give to touch someone's heart. And everyone needs the ability to love and to get loved. This poem touches me a lot! If everyone can help someone no matter how small the thing is, the world will become better :D Nice written!
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Thank you for your kind words of review!! YES!! We all need the ability to love to get loved.....e.. read moreThank you for your kind words of review!! YES!! We all need the ability to love to get loved.....every little deed we do for someone else may touch them in a way we could never, ever imagine!!
A wonderful poem and true words of wisdom. Love goes a lot further hate. A very well crafted poem. I like the other message in the first word of each line of the poem too, maybe hidden or not but done skillfully.
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Thank you so much Tina!! May we all embrace love as the strongest of all of life's forces!!!! And,.. read moreThank you so much Tina!! May we all embrace love as the strongest of all of life's forces!!!! And, I am glad you liked the message of the words of the acrostic - they are the words chosen for use in the contest. Helena has done a great job with coming up with idea!!
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Yes she did. It brought a lot of creative depth to the poem. :)
So beautiful, touching and true... wow Sheila, you never stop to amaze me, with this wonderful set up's of you always...
I am in awe, of your love and light. Keep shining on the cafe forever please :D
E.L.
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Oh, you are just so very sweet!! Your remarks deeply touch me.....and I can only try to share love .. read moreOh, you are just so very sweet!! Your remarks deeply touch me.....and I can only try to share love and light with others......may I always do so my friend!!
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Well, that's what I love about you, because I'm secretly a little bit the same haha... xx
How true..I was taking down hot food to my neighbor in a wheel chair and her husband before he died..someone asked me why I did it..I said God told me to and perhaps one day I might need a little help and someone will be kind enough to return that God given love..Nice one girl..Valentine
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I believe if we do unto others as we would have them do unto us, we shall all live a more loving, an.. read moreI believe if we do unto others as we would have them do unto us, we shall all live a more loving, and peace filled life!
How kind of you to share with others in the way you did. I pray you are always treated with kindness and love my friend!!! You are a Dear Heart Kathie!!
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Sheila...with out God and His Son..I am nothing..with Them in my heart and soul..I am never alone..I.. read moreSheila...with out God and His Son..I am nothing..with Them in my heart and soul..I am never alone..I am thankful I was born into a Christian family..kathie
Must be me, just tried this and again, nothing's coming up.. just an outlined square with a small red x top left.. :(
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Emma............sorry, you are having trouble with it - it was uploaded as a jpeg file, and maybe it.. read moreEmma............sorry, you are having trouble with it - it was uploaded as a jpeg file, and maybe it's not being downloaded properly. I will have to message you the words of the poem without the picture. Thanks for trying!!
......words from Emma in a private message in which she gave me permission to post as her review so .. read more......words from Emma in a private message in which she gave me permission to post as her review so here goes........THANKS EMMA!!!!
Oh Sheila. that's beautiful, absolutely, and for Helena's contest .. such a fine acrostic .. been fiddling but think I'll not continue now.. how can one compete with that.You always touch buttons leading straight to the heart .. well, ok .. you have been known to touch buttons to other parts too .. :) .. you have that incredible ability to find words that stir emotions one way or another .. a working, walking word magician you are...
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And, I say to Sweet Emma..........PLEASE DO ENTER THE CONTEST..........We are all gifted in our own .. read moreAnd, I say to Sweet Emma..........PLEASE DO ENTER THE CONTEST..........We are all gifted in our own way....I am sure you will submit a stunning entry!!!
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:) At least I managed - with your generous help, to add my thoughts on your wonderful acrostic .. a.. read more:) At least I managed - with your generous help, to add my thoughts on your wonderful acrostic .. all my pleasure, dear friend of goodness knows how many years. :)
Right on, Ms Lady of Love!!! I agree with your wonderful poem 100 per cent. Thank for submitting this beautiful acrostic to Tovli's Contets!
'All you need is love, all else is rhetoric'
Helena :)
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THANK YOU for your kinds words............it is my honor to submit this entry to the contest!! I sh.. read moreTHANK YOU for your kinds words............it is my honor to submit this entry to the contest!! I shall always consider to be the most powerful force in the world!!! YES, LOVE SWEET LOVE.........ALL WE NEED IS LOVE!!! When I read this aloud, it was a speech pouring from my lips to those who were praying for help!!!
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