I
Want To Run,
I Want To Hide!
I want to tear down the
walls...
That hold me inside.
I want to reach out....
And,
Touch The Flame,
Knowing
Damned Well I'll Get Burned!
(Sssssssssssssssssssssssssssss......)
I
want to feel sunlight on my face,
I
See The Dust Cloud Disappear,
Without a
trace............................
I
Want To Take Shelter From The Poison Rain!
Knowing
Damned Well.........
I'll Get Burned!
Knowing
Damned Well......
I'll Get Burned!
Knowing
Damned Well...
I'll Get Burned!
We're
Always Building............
Then
Burning...
Down Love!
Burning.........
Down Love!
And,
when I go there.....
I
go there with you............
It's all...I can
do....................
The
City's Aflood............
Our
Love Turns To Rust,
We're
Beaten And Blown,
By
The Wind....
Trampled, In Dust!
I'll show you a
place,
High on a desert plain,
Knowing
Damned Well I'll Get Burned!
Knowing
Damned Well I'll Get Burned!
We're
Still Building Then,
Burning
Down.........Love!
Burning
Down........Love!
And, when I go there....
I go there with
you.....
It's all....... I can do....
(Don't...
Go... There!)
Our love turns to rust!
(Don't...
Go... There!)
We're beaten and blown by the wind!
Blown
By The Wind!
Oh, and I see love...........
See our
love turn to rust!
Don't.........
Go... There!
We're beaten and blown by the wind!
Blown
By The Wind!
Oh,
when I go there.....
I go there with you...
It's all I can
do........
This is actually a "root logic" poem, that describes the yin-yang push-pull dynamics of the poetry, and how energy and information exchange identities, geometrically in particular.
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And when we say don't, that's what people choose to do, out of spite or out of curiosity. LOL. The poem looks so original "on the page," quite an image poem in its own right. And as it is being read the feature of the 'push and pull' dynamics becomes more evidenced in the experience. Thanks for sharing.
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2 Years Ago
The entire book is like that. People aren't used to thinking of words as math or music, but they're .. read moreThe entire book is like that. People aren't used to thinking of words as math or music, but they're both, and when the computers spit out all 4,430 poems, reading them will make almost anyone appreciate just how much they have a life and will of their own. :)
That is correct, we aren’t used to thinking and seeing in certain ways hence process & infer diffe.. read moreThat is correct, we aren’t used to thinking and seeing in certain ways hence process & infer differently what is observable around us.
2 Years Ago
Merely changing any scales and magnitudes for humble efficiency and elegant simplicity, you change h.. read moreMerely changing any scales and magnitudes for humble efficiency and elegant simplicity, you change how people actually think, merely writing down words on a public toilet even. My work is in automating the process, and making it roughly 10,000x more efficient and a million times faster. The singularity approaches, and everything is converging, including all of our experiments.
2 Years Ago
Forget about the invention of the printing press, this is the mathematics of language, any language,.. read moreForget about the invention of the printing press, this is the mathematics of language, any language, any math, and once we have all 430 poems we need, all bets are off.
And when we say don't, that's what people choose to do, out of spite or out of curiosity. LOL. The poem looks so original "on the page," quite an image poem in its own right. And as it is being read the feature of the 'push and pull' dynamics becomes more evidenced in the experience. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
The entire book is like that. People aren't used to thinking of words as math or music, but they're .. read moreThe entire book is like that. People aren't used to thinking of words as math or music, but they're both, and when the computers spit out all 4,430 poems, reading them will make almost anyone appreciate just how much they have a life and will of their own. :)
That is correct, we aren’t used to thinking and seeing in certain ways hence process & infer diffe.. read moreThat is correct, we aren’t used to thinking and seeing in certain ways hence process & infer differently what is observable around us.
2 Years Ago
Merely changing any scales and magnitudes for humble efficiency and elegant simplicity, you change h.. read moreMerely changing any scales and magnitudes for humble efficiency and elegant simplicity, you change how people actually think, merely writing down words on a public toilet even. My work is in automating the process, and making it roughly 10,000x more efficient and a million times faster. The singularity approaches, and everything is converging, including all of our experiments.
2 Years Ago
Forget about the invention of the printing press, this is the mathematics of language, any language,.. read moreForget about the invention of the printing press, this is the mathematics of language, any language, any math, and once we have all 430 poems we need, all bets are off.
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