Burned, Once Again

Her eyes burned like fire, 

But i dared not to extinguish it. 

As i stood, with a pale in hand,

She mouthed the words "trust me"

And as I spilled out the water,

She vanished,

Leaving behind only a pile of ash,

Soon to be blown away. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bill MacEachern]

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