The Final Lament

The Final Lament

A Poem by thewritingthespian
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A woman grieves over the effects of war and tragedy.

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The Final Lament
 
 
 
 
Beside the sea a woman lies
Her heart will grieve forever more
Her spirit hears the silent cries
Where death was brought to war
 
She shuts her eyes in hopes of dreams
“Lord, show me the way!”
She hears no answers, only screams
“Lord, I beg you, I pray!”
 
She casts her eyes upon the waves
“They all have perished and so must I”
She stares among the countless graves
Underneath the dark night sky
 
“Shall I stay, shall I go?
Shall I join the perished souls?
In the sea down below
Will I see the martyred ghouls?”
 
“My sweet child, do not fret
I will guide you to the skies
We will fly among the heavens and yet,
There my golden palace lies”
 
“Shall you stay, Shall you go?
Will you perish, as did Rome?
 Do not squander to and fro
Follow me to our way home!”

© 2013 thewritingthespian


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thewritingthespian
I have a lot to learn when it comes to grammar, but i want to know what you think of my poem. Thank you.

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Oh!Love the lines: She casts her eyes upon the waves.“They all have perished and so must I”

You know, I do like it.I feel something ancient in this all, I feel the history, philosophy here.This poem is a dialogue between a human being and God.I love such subjects.The rhyme is nice,it's your own style,I would like to read more!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thewritingthespian

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Mariam

11 Years Ago

My pleasure :) keep on writing



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Oh!Love the lines: She casts her eyes upon the waves.“They all have perished and so must I”

You know, I do like it.I feel something ancient in this all, I feel the history, philosophy here.This poem is a dialogue between a human being and God.I love such subjects.The rhyme is nice,it's your own style,I would like to read more!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thewritingthespian

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Mariam

11 Years Ago

My pleasure :) keep on writing

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Added on March 28, 2013
Last Updated on March 29, 2013
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thewritingthespian
thewritingthespian

Philadelphia, PA



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