Since You Left

NOTE: I had this poem on here before, but deleted it by accident :( This poem is one that I wrote ball in 11th grade while reading New Moon! It was inspired by when Edward left Bella

my life hasn't been the same
my heart has shattered from all the pain
its driving me insane
because I can't see your face 
without you I feel so out of place
at night I lay in my bed
thoughts running through my head
wondering why you went away
why couldn't you have just stayed

Reviews

[Raj]

Nice work.good rhyme.its really good but little short.