I Try
A Poem by
Amanda Worthington
I feel the eyes
of those who look to me
with admiration
adoration
affection
appreciation.
And I am trying.
I am fighting.
I am winning.
but also losing.
I try,
But I am broken.
I am scared
of failing them.
© 2014 Amanda Worthington
Author's Note
Late night write. Tell me what you think. Comments and constructive criticism are always appreciated :)
Reviews
speaks from the heart..pure and original..nicely penned
Posted 8 Years Ago
that was really good, it tells a great story in short form :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
that was really good, it tells a great story in short form :)
10 Years Ago
Thank you :)
10 Years Ago
your welcome, to me u need to enter it in a contest
Its Vry Connected To evryone i feel, u noticed n described it well maam
Posted 10 Years Ago
Its Vry Connected To evryone i feel, u noticed n described it well maam
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much :)
The vulnerability of the mask being pulled away can scare anybody. Being yourself is the best thing you can do. You owe them nothing and shouldn't feel like you do.
Posted 10 Years Ago
The vulnerability of the mask being pulled away can scare anybody. Being yourself is the best thing you can do. You owe them nothing and shouldn't feel like you do.
10 Years Ago
Thank you :)
So few words but such depth to meaning.
Posted 10 Years Ago
So few words but such depth to meaning.
10 Years Ago
Thank you :)
We try to achieve so much in life to prove ourselves
Posted 10 Years Ago
We try to achieve so much in life to prove ourselves
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Added on September 20, 2014
Last Updated on September 20, 2014
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Amanda Worthington CA
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Why do I write? Because I want my opinions and my thoughts to be known. I want to make other people feel what I do. I love it when it's just me and my characters, late at night with no one to interrup..
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