You Never Stay Long

Your eyes were like fire

staring into my soul.

But I smiled right back

into the eyes of death.

I knew you'd be my death.

because I fell too hard

and you never stay too long.

But I felt complete

with you by my side.

Now

I

Sit

Alone.

Because i knew.

Yet I ignored.

You never stay long.

I know that.

Author's Note

Another poem. The creative spirits are speaking to me today apparently :p. Comments and suggestions are always appreciated :)

Reviews

[Kamari's]

The pain of loving what's bad for you I understand I love this

[Mila]

Besides that one "i" that was I capitalized (a typo I make often) this was very powerful and real. I rarely dabble into poetry so I apologize for being unable to give a constructive response, but I do think that this was a very good piece that was a delight to read. Well done! :)

[Amanda Worthington]

Thank you! it's nice to know my writing entertains others as much as it entertains myself