Kid Like Envy

Kid-Like Envy

 

Secret Embraces
A pain so wrenching

Haunted with images of her

The blondeness of her hair so illuminating

Her face so entrapping

 

Eyes like crystalique spheres,

So glossy and brilliant

 

Dark green envy twines in the brownness that peers out of my eyes

 

Her limbs encase you

Her friction replaces the marks I left along your skin

 

You twirl in a delicate dance

Carnal and passionate

 

Does my face shine out to you?

As you paint her face with your fingertips

 

Does my sinful raven hair darken the golden beauty that draws you?

 

Forgotten, the things we swore we’d mend

Alone, I go green, envy drowning me in it’s wretched head

 

Author's Note

Reviews are always appriciated!! Poetry isnt my strong suit so im working hard to improve it!!

Reviews

[BellaMac]

Great poem!!

[Amanda]

another very good write, steffi! i could feel the envy that was felt as she saw him with another, doing what she had done with him. your talent is showing, girl!

Great job!

Always,

Amanda

[THE BLACK SEAL]

ahh that sinful raven hair...nice

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This was good! I think you have a real talent for writing poetry! The structure seemed to fit this poem. It gave it more meaning for me. It flowed well. I think this is good. Keep writing poetry!