She is everything

Poem that describes so many emotions in me.

She has always been there for me, even when I didn’t need her to

be.

She helped me through the good, the bad, and the sadness of

everyday life.

           

People always ask me to tell them who she is, and I might.

           

Life is short so make it count, even if you think you have no

one, she is there for you too.

           

She was on the 8^th floor with me when I needed help

getting through the painful days.

           

She was with me when life’s lies would lead me astray.

          

She helped me tell my painful story without feeling guilt.

         

  Because we both knew I would make it through.

        

   And Even if I pushed her away I still had her strength.

        

   We knew that I went to great lengths just to survive.

        

   When I was still down she helped me revive.

         

  I don’t know if I should, but still I shall tell.

      

     She is my confidence and she’ll putt you through hell.

               

               

Author's Note

8th floor= Mental Health Floor

Reviews

[writing mojo]

been there before bro...you know the mental health floor, although i have to say your writing style is very clear and consigned, even the flow is not salad tossed and melting pots spilling words, it's not between the world inside and out
where wave urns break against the shore of a plagued existence..you float through this poem of a better nature, not of mad seasons my friend..I am glad you had someone to share a part of your pained soul with
so eloquently done this is pure inspiration, or may be I've just read to much into this poem...and I am rambling on either way...this is good stuff

[realmwriter]

Dude, Hella wise words for 16. Very well said Grant!

[sugar]

good job, i thought this was great....keep on writing

[Pradnya]

hello Grant ,
the poem is just so beautiful , full of emotions,and the rhyming too. thanks for sharing keep writing and sharing too :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

i liked this and the rhyming in it especially enjoyed these lines:
"We knew that I went to great lengths just to survive.
When I was still down she helped me revive."
this is sweet, really from the heart, written nicely :)

[♥ EmeraldHeart &..]

I like this a lot it somewhat reminds me of this song..
"She is Love"- Parachute. But just in a way.
Good job!
-E

[Princess LouLou]

This is a very good, I really like it.
Shows the closeness of the two people well done.