Sonnet IV

The word 'lat' stands for Latin. It is used in the sense that Latina women are very shapely.

Though I lie in this seat and wait for toll
I look for pupils to mend my darkened heart
I see the eyes which stare deep to the soul
And I see the pain of one torn apart
I cannot bear to see this any longer
This sickness is that of which cannot live
It takes life as death grows stronger
And the body turns cold, blue, and comes stiff
Like the bosom of a woman lat
Or the warmth of a house in the winter
These monsters, these HUMANS are not that.
Instead they are drooling and cause splinter
I cannot sense the horrors I'm seeing
These people are no longer human beings.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. Solid lines and visions create by the words.
"I see the eyes which stare deep to the soul
And I see the pain of one torn apart "
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Al]

love it, the body turns cold, blue, and comes stiff" nice work!

[Ricky Campbell]

We can ll turn very evil inside.. nice write

[sinNsincerity]

Interesting! We all can become monsters

[Jamestown]

Wow! I'm so interested to know what is happening to inspire
this piece, very well written and executed, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[the writer of woe]

Thanks Jamestown!

[the writer of woe]

This piece was written because of my English class. During that period, I am surrounded by idiots who can't seem to get what a comma is. This piece was written about the disease known as stupidity taking over men.