In her eyes

In the stillness of her boredom 

she will rise, like a wildfire in bloom,

sweet love will fill her room. 

In her heart a soft breeze will flutter 

within her words she will rise 

with sweetness in her eyes.

Like a delicate sunset around the corner 

she will sigh and breathe out 

because that is what love is about.

**In her eyes**

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this was just magical. but so is love. i really got lost in this drama. it is such an enchanting vignette. we see her rise from her bed and ready to give her heart away. the final line is a closeup of her eyes. when you stare deeply in another person's eyes, something magical happens. thats what it felt like reading this. amazing write. glad to see you back Writergurl.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl)]

thank you for your review on this piece, I am WG daughter. She isn't able to be on here anymore. She is very sick.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

im so sorry to hear that. i hope she gets better soon.
i really want to tell you how much i liked your mother's writing. when i first started using this site, she was one of the first to comment. and we have been following each other since. meeting her has enriched my experience on this site. please send her my well wishes.
ill continue to follow this page. writing sure runs in the family.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl)]

I will tell her and thank you.

[poetgurl]

This is full of compassion and deep feelings for your mama.
I do know what you're going through, I went the suffering of the
loss of my Mom last year. It's been a rough road. I will keep you
both in my prayers.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl)]

aww, thank you so much.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl)]

also I am so sorry to hear that.

[red93]

This is a truly wonderful piece, full of tenderness and compassion. I am so sorry to hear that Writergurl is not well. She was always extremely supportive of my Work, and I of hers. Please convey my warmest wishes for her recovery - from red93 ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl)]

I surely will....