Fading winds

Fading winds - wreak havoc on me 

I get to where I can't hardly breathe 

My soul has been a wreck 

my nerves have been tested, 

and to the very end 

I can feel my insides twist and turn 

to where I can feel every inch of 

my very thoughts burn.

It's a long road to roam on 

when the winds hit me on the backside 

all that I feel isn't too far gone,

I just look out my window 

and feel the fading blows faintly blow.

Reviews

[Dave W.]

I know your poetry is born of pain, I am sorry for what you are going through, this storm will pass, you will get through this valley. there will be healing, you just have to weather the storm, hold on with every thing you can, and get through to the other side. My heart goes out to you, I have been here before.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl)]

Thank you for your insight on this matter