Hotness

There's a fire burning deep inside of me.

Near you I can't seem to remember how to breathe.

You laugh

I smile

I felt a need to do more

Less than talking

More than staring

Please seduce me

Put your hands on me 

We're side by side 

Lock your lips on mine

Take another stolen heart beat

Temperatures rising 

Desire increasing

Lock your lips on mine

We don't have to say anything

Just seduce me

Reviews

[Justaguy]

That's really awesome. Romantic, poetic, and erotic all at the same time. Nicely done!

[Kenzi Griffin]

I love this. Very very interesting and I enjoyed reading it. You're a great writer!! :)

[Carly]

I haven't been on this site for awhile, and I feel like since I've come back to it your writing has matured a lot. This poem is great example (I'm not talking about the theme, but your language and literary techniques) Keep up the good work!

[Aly]

thank you so much :)

[Writer *78*]

nice work you did the theme very well

[Aly]

Thank you :)
Hey I have season 2 episode 1 up if you wanna read

[Writer *78*]

i suggest you give me the link so I would be able to follow it if you decide to switch.

[disheveledApathy]

Oh, so it's that kind of poem. *waggle eyebrows suggestively* Great job, nice phrasing, I love what you did with the theme.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Prayer of divinity
Plea for completion
Height of yearning

[s y e]

This was great. Good job

[Aly]

thank you

[Wórdsmíth]

well, hotness's're nce here, liked here few hotness's...lol
Less than talking
More than staring
Please seduce me
Put your hands on me ...
i think this's an appropriate "HOTNESS", liked it, your word's are powerful.
lovely write pretty & this kinda hotness's're really very nice to read, i enjoyed it, well written, it's a nice piece to read pretty one.

[Aly]

thank you much appreciated.

[Michael Stevens]

Another fine poem!

[Frieda P]

This was rather enticing Aly...I'm so happy you didn't say 'another one about j' ;-) Like the title, 'hotness' says so much.

[Aly]

thank you :)