Feel

I saw you look my way

and walk away

I guess I'm not that much to you

Maybe I never was

I gave my all

Gave my heart

I really believed you were the one 

I never i had your heart

Like I believed I did.

You were just a feeling I had.

A feeling that grew so strong

It nearly broke my heart

Maybe you never liked me back

I must've made it all up in my mind

When I see your blue eyes

I wonder what's really there

Was it just a feeling?

Like the ones I had

I didn't fall because you're tall

I fell for your quirks

I also thought you had the same feelings

I have

Author's Note

another poem about J
also inspired by the song "Just a feeling" by Maroon 5

Reviews

[Jack...]

Very cool but sad. The heart is so very tender and easy to pain.

[Kenzi Griffin]

Sad sad poem. I know the feels, though! You're a great writer! :)

[InsanityWriter]

Nicely done. :)

[disheveledApathy]

Was it an obsession? a mere feeling, like those that come and go like so many summer days? I guess... we'll never know.
:)

[Aly]

Mmhmm

[disheveledApathy]

Yeah

[Wpww!!!]

Love it. But, i feel the ending was sorta cut of.

[Aly]

Actually it's not cut off. I know everyone thinks that but it's not.

[Wpww!!!]

Well i thought it was really goood.

[marie]

this feels a little unfinished... a great start, but perhaps there should be more.

[Aly]

thank you but actually that's it. It's done. It doesn't feel like it but it's not.

[AYVID N]

There are some questions we'll never have an answer to and we'll always be left wondering...

Thanks for the great read Aly!

[Aly]

welcome! Thanks for reading

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

this is a good poem :)

[Aly]

thank you! Much appericated!

[Writer *78*]

nice work you devoloped the emotion well. Question, is there a seaon 2 posted yet and i would like to be added to your list for updates for this season

[Aly]

thank you much appericated.
I sent you a message.

[Michael Stevens]

Another excellent poem!

[Aly]

thank you for reading and reviewing.