Valentine's Day

Valentine's Day

A Poem by Aly

Pink and Red . . .
Those are the colors we see each year
When I look at you
All  I want to do is be with you
To go back to September
I miss the days 
Where you looked at me and I looked at you
All I want is to seize this burning desire I have 
That involves you
Pink and Red . . .
In grade school we were taught those were the colors of our heart
When I am around you 
It's brighter than the sun and stars
It beats faster than a drummer could handle
On this day
I wish you could notice me
And see everything about me
On this one special day
I wish you could hand me a small piece of your heart
I would take care of it
Love it
Keep it forever

© 2013 Aly


Author's Note

Aly
how i feel about Valentine's Day and J

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Very sweet, and sounds like some dumb a*s isn't paying attention!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A Great way to see this day my friend......Well penned.....Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thanks
You made the change so I removed the need. You spoke your thought through to its end... nicely

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thanks. I meant to write in "each" but I forgot it. Thank you.
Chris

11 Years Ago

Ah... a good word "each"...

Welcome and a Happy Valentine's Day to you.
Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you and happy valentine's day to you as well.
So lovely Aly, I really hope he stops being so blind and comes to you soon. You deserve all the happiness in the world. A wonderful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
Lovely job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Okay, with that over with . . . This was so adorable! This is the Valentine's Day poem for me. ;D

Posted 11 Years Ago


A wonderful Valentine's poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
How absolutely freaking adorbale!! If I could go there and slap some sense into that boy I would!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
I

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

whoops I mant to say was "I really liked this poem it's full of love" 100/100
Aly

11 Years Ago

thanks.
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

anytime

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