Do You ?

Do you know the secret I keep ?

Do you feel my feelings ?

Or see it on my face?

Maybe you never saw it happening.

Do you even believe in destiny?

I knew one day you looked and saw me differently

What a feeling

That's in my heart

Your my new home

What a powerful changing feeling

That's hotter than fire and tamer than lions

Do you notice the way I look at you?

Do you know how badly I want to be able to touch your face

Do you know love's powerful changing abilities ?

Do you know your blue eyes are my favorite

Maybe you're heart is sore

Maybe you don't believe in destiny

Look up and see me

Let the fears go away

I'll be yours as long as you're mine

Author's Note

Another Poem about J :)

Reviews

[disheveledApathy]

Some say our fates are woven together like a cloth, intertwined, touching others lives in ways we cannot imagine. Other say our fate is a road, and we have the power to choose our path at a crossing. Either way, it is destiny that keeps us walking, following our decisions. It is destiny that links us all.
(Please don't ask me who "they" is. I have no idea whatsoever. ) :D
Signing off,
Mer

[Aly]

:)

[disheveledApathy]

:/? 8- ;D

[InsanityWriter]

Aww! ^_^

[Mir]

Aw:)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

all I have to say is 100/100

[Aly]

thank you :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

no problem

[AYVID N]

Great job done. New love always does us good!

[Aly]

thank you :)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

awesome job, once again :)

just remember, if you dontt try then you wont know. tell him, im sure he will love it!

[The Nude Writer]

Fantastic poem :)

[Aly]

thank you :)

[scripted]

Lovely write, thank you for sharing!!!

[Aly]

thanks :)

[quinfinn]

J has become an obsession for you. i hope it is a healthy one which you will find rewarding. another blissful write, dedicated to the object of your affection, well done!

[Aly]

thank you :) It's a healthy one. Well at least someone has provided me with much inspiration

[Michael Stevens]

Ah, love; a fine "I wonder?" poem!