Yours

Dim lights

Crowded hallways

People push and shove

Everyone's mind goes round and round

I know for me you're always on my mind

They say you can't always have what you want

Loving a private man probably isn't the best for me

But I only want to be yours

Keeping silent isn't the right way

I have the joy of falling all over again for you

Everyday you make my heart smile

But I'm never sure

Where I stand with you

Are we two friends falling for each other all over again ?

All I want to do is be with you

Author's Note

Another Poem about J

Reviews

[disheveledApathy]

Falling for him again? (sigh) I know how that feels.
But why did you stop in the first place?

[Aly]

things happened. He was distant and well I'm in High School so a new semester started and well we had different classes and I met someone else. It didn't work out, and I like him again. Or maybe I never really stopped....

[InsanityWriter]

You need to ask him out!!! If you feel this way, figure out how he feels too!!! :) Adorable poem. ;)

[Mir]

You're so love struck! I liked the question at the end. It kind of left us hanging, which makes you want to come back and find out more as if you guys were a story out of a fairytale! Great job as per usual! :P

[Aly]

thank you best friend :) :)

[Carly]

The first stanza is good. Out of all of the J poems, I think this one might be the best as far as language and description goes.

[Acer]

Hey, nice to see you again Ally, great writing again, you're really a good writer i think, i loved few lines here,
Everyday you make my heart smile
But I'm never sure
Where I stand with you

Are we two friends falling for each other all over again ?
All I want to do is be with you
this is nice stanza, powerful words. You did again a good job, well-done.

[Aly]

thank you! Thanks :)

[Acer]

you're welcome ;-')
i really love to read your work.

[Aly]

Thanks :) :)

[AYVID N]

I loved it and could relate to it in several ways. Thanks for sharing it!

[Aly]

thank you :) :)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

Im going to reiterate my comment from another poem here:

we only get one chance at this crazy, wonderful ride called life, and we have to make it count because it could end at any moment; take risks while you can, and even if you fall, rise like a phoenix and be all the stronger for it. As well, never give up on something you love. And if you love J, you should go for it! Not to sound corny, but its better to try and fail than not to try at all, because in the words of Coldplay (and many other sources, this is just the one that comes to mind right now from their song Fix You) "if you never try, then you'll never know...When you love someone, but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?"

[quinfinn]

just remember that secret or private loves never work out because they never remain secret or private....open or closed are the choices. clever write.

[Aly]

thank you :) glad you enjoyed it.

[C.C. Marx]

Never knowing where you stand with someone is the hardest thing, especially when you love someone as much as you do......nice work!!

[Michael Stevens]

So many questions; An excellent poem!

[Aly]

thank you :)