He

Blue Eyes

Long fingers

Brown Hair

Toothless smile

You are my favorite

Every man I've ever met.

Every guy I've ever liked. 

Hasn't come close this close.

The crowd is big 

But my eyes always search for you.

I know your face.

Your eyes

Your lips

Everything 

Your voice is my favorite of all

No one will ever care for you

As much as I do

Everything about you 

Draws me

The sweet words that come from your lips

Pale skin

Pink lips

Sweet spirit.

All you are 

Could someday be mine

Everyday I always search 

For you

Search for the person

Who has my soul

Brown Hair

Blue Eyes

Long fingers

Great Voice

You're everything I want

Everything I need

Author's Note

Another poem about J

Reviews

[Mir]

This was very sweet:)

[disheveledApathy]

Oh . . . Another blue eyes or the same one?

[Aly]

it's about J

[InsanityWriter]

So sweet. ^_^ Nice poem. ;)

[Leigh]

This is very loving, but who is He?

[Aly]

a guy I go to school with.

[Leigh]

Gotcha, very sweet

[Aly]

yup :) He's the best.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

well this is sweet. 100/100

[Aly]

thank you :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

anytime :)

[eglantine]

Very simplistic and true.

[Aly]

thank you :)

[AYVID N]

Toothless smile... :) so sweet!
Enjoy him!

[Aly]

:) I do

[quinfinn]

i can feel the longing and the desire in this piece, it flows like warm treacle on a hot pancake. smooth as silk and sweet as honey. excellent piece of prose!

[Aly]

thank you so much :) :)

[C.C. Marx]

Someone is SMITTEN!! well j sounds pretty darn cute if you ask me, come on aly put on your big girl pants and tell him how you feel!!! Nicely done

[Aly]

I'm def smitten. Oh I dunno C. . . . it's . . . I dunno

[C.C. Marx]

Its complicated I know :) but it was worth a shot!!

[Aly]

Eh. . . I dunno . . . .

[Michael Stevens]

Good luck, Aly!