Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by Aly

I never wanted it to end. 
Everything was perfect. 
I felt closer to you than I've ever felt before. .  .
I can still feel your arms around me.
I still feel myself smiling. 
Dreaming of you 
I never felt more alive.
Colors . . . were the feelings and the entire sight of the dream.
I never wanted to leave. 
You make my heart beat
Even though it was only a dream.
I wish we could be together.

© 2013 Aly


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Aly
Another Poem about J

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aw.....the feels here...i hope J comes around and wants u to be together...im a real sucker for romance so yeah...awesome poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :) :) :)
I really want to be with him, but ya know. . .I'm unsure as to whether or .. read more
PURE. . .PRESSIOUS. . .PERFECT, THIS POEM IS!!! IT COMES FROM THE HEART. SOUNDS LIKE THE DREAM WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice dream, Aly!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thanks :)
it seems that J has really left an impression within that heart of yours. this is truly beautiful. an honest and loving write. nicely expressed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)

Yes. He has.
I can feel your saddness here but don't ever give up hope some deams do come true. Another lovely write Aly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

I wish I hadn't woke up. Haha. Thanks :)
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Haha I bet :-)
Aly

11 Years Ago

:)
A sweet, innocent, hopeful dream. How lovely!! Nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

well He would be like what was it about? Me: Oh you know I'm not over you so it was pretty romantic
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

AWKWARD MOMENT ALERT!!! Ya so take the obvious advice and don't tell him haha
Aly

11 Years Ago

Lol. Got it.

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