Poison

Your mouth is sweet. 

My lips crave more. 

I want this burning desire 

more and more

Don't you know that I want you?

Your mouth is my poison. 

Every word you say

Every smile you give 

Is sweet. 

So desirably sweet.

Oh I'm not brave

But only silent near you.

If only you could hear the words in my mind.

You'd be surprised.

Oh I still care about you.

I will always will.

You don't know it.

Or maybe you do.

Author's Note

This is about a different guy. Someone I've known for a year now. Since I write about many guys. This about a guy whose first name stars with "J" and this was inspired by the song "Poison and Wine" by The Civil Wars

Reviews

[Mir]

You say this was inspired by the song, and it really has a musical quality to it!
The starting was great, and then you kind of lost it towards the middle, but then near the end you got it back! So woo! :)

[Aly]

thank you best friend!

[InsanityWriter]

Very well done. :)

[disheveledApathy]

My favorite part:"If only you could hear the words in my mind..." If he could read your mind, things would be a lot less complicated. But they would probably be a lot more awkward. ;)

[Aly]

Haha! Def!!
Check out my new poem! "Again"

[AYVID N]

I know sweet poison...yes i do!
A clever write!
Thanks for this one!

[Aly]

welcome! :) Thank you for reading and reviewing.b

[Michael Stevens]

Another excellent poem!

[Aly]

thank you :)

[quinfinn]

to say that someone's mouth is poison conjures many images, however, i think i see the meaning here. i like the openness of your innermost desires in this write, they propel the richness of the piece. very nicely written.

[Aly]

:) thank you.
Even though I haven't actually kissed him, I believe this is what the experience would be like.

[hmarieee]

This is great !

[Aly]

thank you so much :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
I encourage you to read my other poems.

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

awesome :) this guy is very lucky to have such a poet in his life lol wonderful!

[Aly]

:) He doesn't know I write Poetry lol.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

oh man, if he knew you wrote poetry...about him...i know that, for me, if a guy ever wrote poetry for me, id melt like putty. Im sure he'd do the same if you showed him :) once again, wonderful :)

[Aly]

Oh I dunno. . .haha. I see it going to different ways "Oh...." His mind: Wow...obsessed much? Or. . ."Cool" His mind: Wow. (in a good way)

I believe in the first one the most.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

lol nawh, i think it may seem that way at first, but he will come to appreciate it :)

[Aly]

I dunno. . . .haha. He's a 16 almost 17 year old boy. Haha.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

lol k, how old are you then? i think itd only be creepy/obsessive if you were like 40 or something :P

[Aly]

I'm 16. Haha.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

lolz well, not creepy. i know a lot of guys my age (im 18) who appreciate that kind of stuff and think its sweet, so try not to worry too much about it. I am sure if he ever finds out he will love it :)

[Aly]

Maybe. haha. I don't think he'll ever know. Unless I became like ya know. Famous or something.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

lol we can all only hope to become like great poets or authors :) i mean, hopefully it happens someday but if it doesnt, it doesnt.

[Aly]

Right. But. . . I dunno. I don't think I would show him. Unless me and him were in a relationship.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

lol yeah, i know the feel. I don't think I'd ever show the guy I care about the poems I write on here...he'd think I was insane or something :P

[Aly]

That's how I feel!! :)

[Wpww!!!]

nice i like it

[Aly]

thank you :) :)

[C.C. Marx]

Guys can be quite similar to a drug, always got you wanting more. Great poem!!

[Aly]

True that!! They are so much like drugs. . . .thank you :) :)

[C.C. Marx]

They need to come with warning labels like...
Beware of d-bag
Warning highly addictiveread moreThey need to come with warning labels like...
Beware of d-bag
Warning highly addictive
Don't trust anything not put in writing

[Aly]

True that! Guys who meet Taylor Swift and get involved with her should now because this is invisibly tattoed on her forehead "We break up...I'm gonna make a million bucks because you're gonna be a song"

[C.C. Marx]

Exactly, sometimes I wonder if she dates just to write songs.....if they came with labels it would be soooooo much easier picking who not to waste your time on

[Aly]

Exactly. But in a way it's kinda good they don't...if every "nice perfect guy" had that. None of them would be avaible :)

[C.C. Marx]

OMG SOO TRUE!!! Sorry went caps lock crazy there but ya and anyways perfect guys are overrrated anyways *said half convincingly*

[Aly]

i thought so to. . .til I met one :)

[C.C. Marx]

Dear lord I'm jealous can you say #singlegirlprobs?!?!?

[Aly]

Haha. I'm still single. Like I said. Long complicated story.

[C.C. Marx]

Then we can be forever alone together hahah just kiddingw I don't wanna be stuck with 50 cats

[Aly]

Hey now....don't you mean 500,000 pieces of paper??? Haha.

[C.C. Marx]

Now where do you propose I get all that paper that is a lot of paper

[Aly]

That's how much I use. . . haha.

[Aly]

Walmart dude. They have everything.

[C.C. Marx]

Ahhh walmart., getting kicked out of there is on my bucket list lol

[Aly]

Hahahahahahaha!!!! I would so love too!!! Sadly I have always to buy something from there. . . darn you walmart. . . .

[C.C. Marx]

That's ok you can come with me and we can wear shirts that say lice and hand out lemons on the street, another bucket list idea

[C.C. Marx]

*life

[Aly]

interesting :) :)

[C.C. Marx]

I'm a creative kid, no judging!!! Do you wanna come or not?!?!?

[Aly]

YES!!! in the near distant future. . .haha.

[C.C. Marx]

I mean why not?!?! As those crazy kids say now a days "YOLO"

[Aly]

Let's get rid of all those YOLO T-Shirts while we're there too haha.

[C.C. Marx]

Pretty please?!! That saying really irritates me......I thinking we might possibley be long lost cousins

[Aly]

I'm a thinkin' we were sisters seperated :)

[C.C. Marx]

Maybe but you need to be older or younger cuz I have a long lost twin on here and she also has a twin so I'm thinking you probably aren't our quadtuplet or whatever you call it.......or are you?!?

[Aly]

I'm 16! Almost 17 hahaha.

[C.C. Marx]

You can be a quadtruplet or the older sister since your practically ready for the nursing home :ppp

[Aly]

Well now . . . jk jk. haha.

[C.C. Marx]

Are you losing you eyesight yet heheh

[Aly]

Funny funny

[C.C. Marx]

I'm hilariously I Cant help it :pp