I Don't Want To

I don't want to fall apart again or ever.

You're the one who ended it with me.

It ended so quick.

I wish I wasn't so fragile.

Because then I could easily move on.

I never wanted to beg for your time. 

Or for you to notice me.

This mess isn't just bad luck.

Like broken glass

It all came falling down.

I don't want to fall apart again or ever

How could you say that lie to me?

I know you'll never know.

The pain that was caused in me.

Author's Note

inspired by the song "Fall Apart Today" by Schulyer Fisk

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Beautifully written and sad. (: Loved it. ^_^

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i feel the same way...i hate that feeling of falling and never being able to get up again :( amazing job once more, and keep up the fantastic writing!

[Aly]

:)

[Michael Stevens]

A fine poem; you've been busy!

[Aly]

:)

[Michael Stevens]

Thanks!

[AYVID N]

"I know you'll never know.
The pain that was caused in me." - It's good he shall never know coz he does not deserve to. Thank you for writing this poem that I related to so well.

[Aly]

welcome :)

[quinfinn]

when it crumbles and breaks it falls all at once and then all over you....but then there is the residual glass which must be swept away, and you are left to do the sweeping, well said.

[Aly]

thank you.

[Carolann Dowsett]

I can feel you in this Aly, its full of raw emotion. Another great write.

[Aly]

thank you :) please read my other ones :) :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh yes I will for sure Aly I've just been flat out, got so much going on right now but each day I will read as many as I can. :)

[KeeD]

Haven't heard the song as yet but through this poem I can tell it's a good song. Well written Aly.

[Aly]

thank you :)

[devon]

Not so much descriptive as far as imagery; it's more of a straight forward, raw, "this is how I feel" kind of poem. It's more contemporary, and I admire that. I like it! You did a nice job on it, and I'm happy to see I'm not the only one inspired by songs!

:)

[Aly]

Most of my poems are "this is how I feel" Thank you. Music definetely helps me when I'm writing a Poem