Four Words

Four Words

A Poem by Aly

How could you lie? 
How could you break my heart with four words. 
Four words I believed were true.
But were only a lie. 
Four words to end a friendship that took time to build. 
Four words for me to never see you again. 
Four words I hope I never hear or experience again. 
Four words. 
That's all it took.
Four words broke my trust. 
Four words stole that good image of you. 
Four words showed who you really are.

© 2013 Aly


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i am trying to forget four little words..."i don't love you" then four more appear..."i just want out" and then four more "please leave me alone" and it goes on and on like a horrible nightmare from that point. the fact that you never give them up is excellent because each of us has our own "waterloo" in four little words...this is one fantastic poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

The words you have posted on here are none of the words I heard. But thank you for reading and revie.. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

i truly did
It's like you read my poem "Little Did She Know" and then wrote this in addition to it!! I definitely connect with every word.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you! I haven't read it but I will now. I'm glad you liked it.

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