Olivia

Olivia

A Story by Aly
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Olivia Jane was once kidnapped now 25 years later her kidnappers have taken another little girl.

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Olivia Jane, 1991

I was hiding. I did my best to stay hidden. Footsteps came and went. I heard the same angry growl over and over. 


“Where is she?” said Mary.

                

“I don’t know,” answered Phil. “I don’t�"“ He was cut off by a loud knocking at the door.


“Police!” a male voice called. I was underneath the floor boards. I saw Phil and Mary clearly. “The police?” said 

Mary.  


“Mary just�"“


“POLICE,” the male voice called again.


“Just a second officer!”


“Phil you moron!”


“Mary�"“


“One more time! POLICE! Open the door or we bust it down!”


Phil sighs. Phil and Mary walk over


“Hello Officer,” said Phil as he runs a hand through his black hair


“What can we do for you?” Mary said with her sweet voice.


“Ma’am, step aside.”


“What can we do for you?” said Phil.


A different voice “Where’s the girl?”


“If I may kindly say, you have the wrong home. We don’t have any children,” answered Mary.


“Ma’am, we’d like to take a look around the property,”


“That won’t be�"“ Mary began.


“We have a search warrant,” I heard a noise.


“But �"“


“Officer Brown please stay with Mr. and Mrs.Boyle, while Phillips and I look around,”


“Sure then Mac,” said Officer. “Sir. Ma’am, hands where I can see them.”


I heard footsteps coming in my direction.

 

“Mac what if she’s not here,”


“We can’t take any chances,”


“Hey!” I called.


They looked around. “Down here!” I called.


They looked at me and came closer.


“Olivia Jane?”


“Help me!”


The one called Mac smiled, and spoke into what looked like a walkie talkie.


“Men! We got her!”


“Olivia how do we get to you?” asked Officer Phillips


“I’ll come to you,” I pulled myself up into the living room. I put the floor boards back in.


“We’ve been looking for you. You poor girl.”


“Where’s my mom? My dad?”


“They’re okay. They’re going to be happy to have you home.”


Officer Mac put his arm around me.  Officer Phillips went straight to Phil and Mary.


“Phil Boyle and Mary Boyle. You’re under arrest.”


“What the. Where did she come from?”


“You have the right to remain silent. If you do not have a lawyer one will be provided for you�"“


Mac was on the phone “Jill? Jefferson? We got her.” He handed the phone to me.


“Mommy,”


“Honey? Oh my gosh. Jefferson! Jefferson! They got her!”


I was taken home. Reunited with the family I had so missed. 

 

 

 

Olivia Jane, 2016

Exactly 25 years later….


“Olivia. You’re gonna wanna see this.”

I looked up from my cereal. I stared at my husband Eli, he pointed towards our television.  A newscaster was speaking


“For national news today. Exactly twenty five years ago. Phil and Mary Boyle were arrested for kidnapping a young eleven girl. Exactly one week ago Phil and Mary Boyle were released from Prison but now on the run. There has been a report that one young girl is missing. Another eleven year old girl named �"“


“You’re kidding me.”


I looked at Eli, his face serious.  


“Mom!”


I turned and looked at our oldest son Jason who recently turned fourteen.


“Mom! Look what Drew did to my Alegbra homework! He colored! Colored!”


I rub my forehead.


Eli spoke “C’mon Jason he’s just a kid.”


“Dad! It’s my homework.”


“Okay, look just turn it in to your teacher anyway. If they have a problem they can talk to me. Let’s go. Or 

everyone will be late.”

© 2013 Aly


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Aly
Just something I wrote. Tell me if it's worth finishing.

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Finish it!! :D It's very interesting and well written (only a few typos). Great job!

100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
yes!!! most definitely finish it!!! send me a request when you do!! can't wait to read the rest!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
marie

11 Years Ago

your welcome :) i loved it:)
I hope you do finish it. It was a great story to read!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
Yes Aly finish it for sure this could go in so many exciting directions. Well done on another great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Ooooooh. Definitely worth finishing. You left us hanging, used a great, intriguing beginning, and you're asking us whether we think you should finish it?! ;D
-Mer

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

Haha. Thank you :) glad you liked it.
awesome :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
You should finish it. It has a great start. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
A promising beginning; I vote yes, finish it, that is if you want to!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
Michael Stevens

11 Years Ago

You'r so welcome!
Please finish! I like the ending that leaves you guessing but do want to know how it turns out!! This is really good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
Yes!!!! Finish it!!!! Finish it!!!! Finish it!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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