I'm Here You're There

I'm Here You're There

A Poem by Aly
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A poem about B

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My memories are slowly fading away
I try to hold on.
To you and to them.
Today I thought I saw you. 
I froze.
I stared, 
I soon realized it wasn't you.
I know it's only been four months.
But I'm still counting.
It isn't as hard. 
As it was before.
I still think about you. 
I don't wonder what you're doing.
Or if your thinking of me.
I think about how things use to be.
I relive memories everyday.
I think about what life could be like when you finally come home.
You're over there.
Working hard. 
I miss you dearly.
While I'm here at home
Trying to keep busy.
The days are easier. 
But when I come home it's alittle harder.
But I know soon the wait will be over.
Soon I'll see your face.
Soon I'll hear your voice.
Soon I'll be home.
Because your arms are my home. 
And right now I am homesick

© 2013 Aly


Author's Note

Aly
This is a poem about B, he's a guy a like.

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Yes good ending and nice rhythm all the way through a very enjoyable read

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
"because your arms are my home/ and right now i am homesick"

oh that is beautiful.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
A little sad, but very sweet. ^_^ Last two lines were my favorites!! :) Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
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Mir
I absoltley loved this!
I can relate to this with two different people. Which is probably bad. But ones past and ones present (hopefully future..lol)
Hope things will work better for you and him than they're working for me and the guy I like. :) Mines on a fast trip to Nowhere, sadly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

I can relate to the no where part miranda.
Aw glad you like it.
Oh...you are putting me in a very sentimental mood....now I'm missing him too! Cant wait to get back home from office!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

Lol. Thank you. Always glad my writing can help you relate.

Aly
the last two lines were a great finish.. im sure he misses you too.. i hope he got to read this, im sure he would have appreciated it, it couldnt have been a better piece of the fondness you share

very nice job

Antonio


Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

yes. hopefully me and him work out though. but I'm just grateful we're really good friends. Makes th.. read more
Antonio Valentino

11 Years Ago

ahhh.. well in my opinion if you're not great friends in the first place then why even take it to th.. read more
Aly

11 Years Ago

yes. Thanks.
Very sweet and heart felt. Nice job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Much appericated.

Aly
jennilouhoo

11 Years Ago

Any time!
great write loved the story it tells:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
marie

11 Years Ago

:) no problem:)
I could feel the heartache clear over here; excellent poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you
Awwwww. This was sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you

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