Fallen

Piece by piece.

Word for word. 

A thousand moments that filled my heart. 

How long do I fantasize

About you and me

I make believe it's enough. 

As I let myself fall hard.

You turned back.

As fell hard, I let my guards down. 

Piece by piece

Is how my heart slowly broke

I know I was simply pretending

Pretending, nothing is wrong

Pretending, when we talk I don't get the sense something is wrong.

I imagine we go back to the start

I keep my falling a secret

Every step i take I feel like I've done something wrong

How could I have fallen so hard

Author's Note

Just something I wrote

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Simply answered, cause we never see love coming till it is too late.

[Aly]

thank you for reading and reviewing. Much appericated.

[Fiona Nadine]

Very beautiful and I relate to it so well :)

[Aly]

Awesome. Thank you.

[Fiona Nadine]

You're welcome

[jennilouhoo]

Very nice! I like the last two lines about feeling guilt for no reason and blaming yourself. Sometimes it seems as if you are writing poems about my life, lol! Loved it!

[Aly]

Lol! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

[Aly]

P.S. I....MIGHT'VE stolen your diary....;)

[jennilouhoo]

:O *gasp* this explains EVERYTHING! lol

[Aly]

;)

[Dr. Wood ?]

should it be..You turned back as ...I.....fell hard?

You paint a poignant picture here

[Aly]

I dunno. To me either works.
Thanks.

[Dr. Wood ?]

youre probably right..ignore me, I speak the rubbish so many times

[Aly]

Lol.

[Leigh]

You have relayed the perfect impression of the pain suffered, which is what makes this so poignant and beautifully put

[Aly]

thank you so much

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i really like this, you did a wonderful job :) I think everyone at some point has felt this, which is what makes it so awesome.

[Aly]

Thank you. Much appericated.

[krish]

awesomeness somehow is here........

[Aly]

Thank you

[krish]

my pleasure,,,.........

[The Invisible Girl]

This is really good!! :) Awesome poem! 100/100

[Aly]

Thank you so much :)

[The Invisible Girl]

You're welcome! :D

[marie]

nice write, great job:)

[Aly]

Thank you

[marie]

:)no problem i enjoyed it:)

[Aly]

Glad you did

[marie]

:)

[s y e]

One word: Beautiful!


Omg, where the heck have you been girl?! I miss you, haven't spoken in ageees!

[Aly]

Thank you!

[s y e]

Welcome!