Mountains

A poem about life

I like to think

that mountains

are like jagged scars

on the earth's 

surface.

And they so much 

resemble

the marks we put 

on our own skin

with the rusted knife

from our

father's

kitchen

drawers.

So, if the earth

is hurting so profoundly,

does that mean

we

are

hurting

too?

Author's Note

Not great at poetry so bear with me. Just writing what I feel.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Nicely composed and very visual. Keep on writing.

Chris

[Isabella Cezanne]

Thanks so much!

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.

[Crowley]

I think we are all in this together, so the answer may be yes. Great analogy and beautiful piece. Loved it!

[Isabella Cezanne]

Thanks so much! Your feedback means a lot, I'm not an experienced writer.

[Crowley]

You are doing fine in my book and will only get better if you stick with it. I’m rooting for you!!!!

[Isabella Cezanne]

Thank you!!