Stand

a short poem about one of my newest story ideas

 

 

I’m all alone

Can you help me out?

I need you now

 

Do you want

To take a chance

Just one final stand

 

This is the last

Straw

I’ve had it with you

Now

 

So count me out

 

If you don’t

Make a change

Today

 

Then I’m done

And like a ghost

I’ll be gone

 

Author's Note

3/16/09

Reviews

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

I like how such angry persuasion is centered directly to just one person.
Good write.

Punishment

[Meredith Leigh]

This can speak to so many people in so many different ways. I like the way that is can be interpreted in different ways, but it still has that poetic feel. Great job!

- Kriss

[Jinx's Heart]

I like the strength the author brings out in this poem. It shows a strong, confident feeling--someone I would want to follow. I like it! Good job!