Destiny Shaping

one of my first haiku writings

 

We lovers began amidst war

Sentenced to death, our love remains intact

Standing strong, destiny is shaping

 

Author's Note

the word we were incorporating is 'shaping'

Reviews

[LostinKristina]

this makes me extremely jealous.
my haiku's' always suck.
great job.

[jesseseraph]

death is the sentence of war, love is the shape of destiny
the thought roads travel through your poem.