Uninvited Lover

Uninvited Lover

A Poem by fallendemonofmercy
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hate and love have a thin tether line - so similar, and so cruel uninvited love leads to forbidden, cat and mouse consequences

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Come, my gentle one
Hold me in your arms
There is no need to cause alarm
I mean no harm
 
Touch me
Captivate me
Inspire me
Awaken me
Lock me up
Hide me away
Keep me sheltered
Entertain
 
I am yours now
You stole my heart
First to play the game
Easy to leave a victor
 
What can you do
When your heart beats true
When you’ve given all you’ve got
And fallen deep into darkness
A point of no return
 
I hate that I love you
But love that I found you
I am hopeless, powerless against you
But you know this, my greatest weakness
 
Kiss me
Love me
Keep me in your bed
Tie me down beneath you
Caress my skin
 
Damage me, your little toy  
What use am I to you?
The sea is full of fish
And I am but one pool
 
I am yours now
I hate that I love you
I know you know
I love you
 
So deep into loves eternal abyss
I’ve wandered, a perfect dream world
How cold you’ve turned, shattered my reality
How distant, how bitter, how cruel
 
But I love you
 
My prey, my love
My desires are pure
Against my will
 
Turn the key
Open the lock
 
You have me
But you will regret it

© 2009 fallendemonofmercy


Author's Note

fallendemonofmercy
an example of the hardships love can brew

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Why am I not meeting more women who want me to tie them up? You are the second writer today that has used the words "Tie me down beneath you". Sorry just a weird observation.

Anyway, I may have missed it but your signature as I call it, wasn't in your piece. Which shows diversity. There seems to be a spark of anger in you, a sense of desire to get back at those who hurt you, fascinating.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Love always has a cost, doesn't it? Your last phrase is chilling, but so often true.

Posted 15 Years Ago


an accurate description of how truly powerless we are when it comes to matters of the heart. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


love in my opinion is hard, but tht is besides the point. i hate most love poems but this one was in my opinion was great.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


An absolutely wonderful and compelling read. Thanks for sharing. I love reading about love and you capture all the emotions tied to love effortlessly.

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Posted 15 Years Ago



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