My Last Song/Goodbye

One of my songs.

I never wanna lose you for the things I've done wrong,

please listen to me, I swear, this will be my last song.

 

I never meant to hurt you,

never meant to say those words.

Now I know I screwed up,

I never wanna see you hurt.

time and time again i count,

the days that pass us by.

The days you arent in my arms

I guess this means

goodbye.

 

I always put you in second, but now I can't get those seconds back.

I always thought i was strong, but your the one who made me crack.

The trail you led me on, has twisted outta shape.

But now your arms will always be,

my escape.

 

I never meant to hurt you,

never meant to say those words.

Now I know that I screwed up,

I never wanna see you hurt.

Time and time again I count,

The days that pass us by.

The days you aren't in my arms,

I guess this means

goodbye.

 

I never wanna lose you, for the things that I've done wrong,

Please listen to me, I love you, and I never wanna let you go.

Reviews

[paradise]

Wow this is a great song very well written

[TJ]

"I always put you in second, but now I can't get those seconds back." love this line. I can definitely tell this is a song, very melodic!!
Good work

[Jake Staffeld]

You spelled escape wrong at the end of the third stanza.

[Silent Knight]

Beautiful. Very well written and very nice.