heart broken

A heart break classic (sorry for any spelling errors)

My heart breaks in two

Knowing I will never be with you

How I wish you could see my love

you see the brown hair, faded jeans me you should think of.

My green eyes so full of care

Finding you was so ever rare

If we never find that old spark

And if we will be forever apart

Know that I will always love you

And you I shall always view 

As never renewable

even If we always stay forever unsuitable

I wish we where in a fantasy

But sadly this is reality

The thought of us not being together is crappy

But I hope you are forever happy.

Reviews

[Jen Yarrington]

"My heart breaks in two
Knowing I will never be with you"

This line alone can capture anyone's attention because we've all been there - unrequited love. You speak a universal language with those two lines. Good luck. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Sad but good. Thank you for penning...:)................

[Saddam]

I wish we where in a fantasy
But sadly this is reality
The thought of us not being together is crappy
But I hope you are forever happy.

I can feel your panted hear. It very nice one dear. Keep it up.

[Mileya]

Thank you very much.