A Warning to The Cruel

This is an angry and mean poem. Do not read if you are easily upset.

(Author's note= This is an angry poem.   Do NOT read if you are easy to upset.   This poem is designed to be a little angry.   This is your last warning.)

 

To the wife beaters

To the rapist

To the abusers of women

And the murderer of girls

You best hope I never find you

You best pray I never met you

For if we do

I will make you pay

For all the pain

You caused

 

I will smash your fingers

So you never touch again

I will rip out  your tongue

So never again will hateful words come from you

I rip off your genitals

So you will what you are now

Nothing

 

And when I am done with you

If you are lucky

And feel guilty for what you have done

I will take your life

So you will feel no pain

 

For those who feel no guilt

For those who feel they did nothing wrong

I will leave you alive

To suffer your life

As what you have always been inside

A hideous monster

Author's Note

I hate people who hurt women. I hate men who hurt anyone female. If I ever kill someone over something, it would be over something like this.

I have no idea why I decided to write this. I just an urge to write it.

If you are someone who has hurt a female, this is your first and last warning.

Reviews

[J.Black]

"And feel guilty for waht you have done" -- this is a perfect poem and I wouldn't want a spelling mistake to hold it back. What*

I love this poem in everyway possible. I wrote one as well called "Penance" about the abuse of woman. I strongly go against this as well and I to will cut off any man's dick, hand or anything else he is using to abuse a woman with. No one should have to go and endure this pain... woman are precious gifts. Not something you can just have your way with. Good write!

[Flame DM]

Definately feel the passion here, basically leaps out of the page. I have to agree, all men that hurt women suck so bad.

I think my favorite stanza is how you describe your punishment to them. Short and brutal. can picture you saying it in such a calm demeaner. Which, is alot scarier when people say that to you calmly about how they're going to kill you, because we all expect the angry responce.

Wonderful write as always ATG. *Two thumbs up*

[Cam]

I loved this.

I agree completely.

I don't like killings or violence in general and have vowed to stay ast it, there are other ways, but yes that is something I hate.

Going after the "weaker" target, it makes me sick.

Wife beaters, pedo, just make me sick to stomach :/

[Tai-San]

why did u write this? its good though. were you angry at something?

[revenant21]

You can feel anger surging through this one. I completely agree about the abuse of women. And I like J. blacks comment to... :P