The Girl Of My Dreams

The Girl Of My Dreams

A Poem by ATG

The girl of my dreams
Is the perfect girl for me
And she is real
And she is wonderful

She is so beautiful
So funny
So kind
And so smart

The girl of my dreams
Is in love with me
Wants me
Wants to keep me

She laughs
At all my jokes
And we have too much
In common with each other

The girl of my dreams
Doesn't want me
Because we are too far away
From each other

She lives in one country
And I another
She wants me there physically
But I have no money.

The girl of my dreams
I swear I will meet her
I am saving up money
To go where she lives
And I will kiss her
And hold her in my arms

© 2008 ATG


Author's Note

ATG
Bad format due to messed up computer. I will fix it soon.

I just felt like getting my emotions for a girl I like down on paper. I don't know why.

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Cute, and sweet. I'm glad you know which to, two, or too to use! That just annoys me when people don't know! Anyways, this was true and spoken from the heart; which is a breath of fresh air for me.
Nice writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Well the two of you will meet soon for sure! All the best!

Posted 15 Years Ago


awww thats so cute. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is wonderful. This girl sounds really amazing. The emotion is illustrated well here. Good luck with your girl.
Pepper...

Posted 15 Years Ago


Omg Im going thru the same thing............Im so sorry u have to.
Being away from the one you love is more pain than anyone deserves.
This portrays the emotion perfectly.
Good Job with this.

MMFCL,
Malizzious

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a very empowering write.. the uplifting vibe here will act like a spell to take you to her waiting arms!

"She lives in one country
And I another
She wants me there physically
But I have no money."

I so know that, the girl of my dreams also lives in another country.





Posted 16 Years Ago


This poem was so very sweet! It is good to let your feelings out! I am glad that you shared this with everyone!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This made me cry. its so cute. Extremly pretty!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Well, sometimes when you get inspired by someone/something you have to write it down, and once you do you feel a lot better.

Really good :P

Posted 16 Years Ago


bittersweet

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 28, 2008

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ATG

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