Spirit Eater

Death is no escape

 

I will find you

I will destroy you

And in the end

I will get what I want

 

Your death

Will make me stronger

Your soul

Will belong to me

And with it

I can do great things

Reviews

[J.Black]

Wow. You actually are a really excellent writer you know. You definitely got something here.
It was actually kinda creepy and frightened me. But that is what made it so flippin' great!
Definitely fell in love with the lines:
"Your soul
Will belong to me
And with it
I can do great things."

Very dark! Well done.

[revenant21]

I thought I gave a review for this!!! Oh well anyways. I loved it. I liked the ending of it a lot.

[Tai-San]

I. Love. This.

Does that sum it up?

[Flame DM]

o.O so short and it definately creeped me out. I read this and looked at the screen and said. "What the hell did I do to make you want to do THAT to me!?" this is very powerful and my favorite was

I will find you
I will destroy you
And in the end
I will get what I want

the whole DESTROY you line physically made me cringe. Mazin job!

-Flame

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

This reminds me of my Izanami, the character in a script I had to write. She's totally ruthless, I love her to death but her story is boring. She was such an awesome Shinigami, kicked everyones a*s. This really presents the self centered perspective of the narrator, the "Spirit Eater". He says "I" 4 times. Well done!

[Kiddx]

WOW! Such powerful words here, I like this, this piece is to the point and well written.

I like this poem; it's straight to the point.

[C.J.]

wow nice and scary good write all the way i think the i will find you part i read it in a dark cold voice.

[C.m.v]

Very unique and interesting....kinda creepy! lol
Im interested to know what inspired you to write this one...it's definitely thought provoking..albeit in a morbid kinda way. ;)

[C.L. Wilson]

ooh. a poem about a spirit being that eats souls. reminds a bit of something from an anime like Inyuyasha.