Revenge Poem

A man who seeks revenge

Is a machine

With fuel

Everlasting

With power

Ever growing

Without fear

Or pain

 

A man who seeks revenge

Is a machine

That can not be stopped

Or bargained with

Only destroyed

Or avoided

Reviews

[revenant21]

VERY true. I mean if someone gets really pissed off, I'd step out of the way.

[Flame DM]

so true. men full of revenge are the scariest s**t in the whole world. You see someone pissed and its like they have "RUN AWAY" Branded on their foreheads with hot iron they are machines. again, you really get to a deeper message with a bullzeye! Amazing writer, you are

Flame

[Kiddx]

Such truth really, this is wonderful. I like the way you write.

[Tai-San]

I think this is wonderful. and it's not just this poem. you all together are a wonderful writer. keep up the writing and ill keep reading!

[C.m.v]

Dude, Im seeing a disturbing pattern here....lol
Seriously, this is interesting. I think you have alot more to tell than just in those few lines. It's almost as if it's more like the beginning of a story...one you should definitely finish.