A Rainbow Of Colors

A Rainbow Of Colors

A Poem by K. N. Graf
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Red Orange Yellow Green Blue Violet

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Watch the paintbrush on the page

Yellow shows the bright, morning haze

Green grass hugs the world like a glove

Dark blue of the sky above

Pretty pink flowers scatter the ground

White, puffy clouds look down all around

Quiet, purple butterflies fly through the air

Brown, young puppies run around without a care

Bright, red balloons on the end of a string

A young girl letting her orange hair fling

Black birds soaring all over the sky

Many more colors the brush can try

© 2008 K. N. Graf


Author's Note

K. N. Graf
I don't really like the last line.

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i fixed it, so hopefully everyone likes the re-write!

~K. N. Graf

Posted 16 Years Ago


i like it! it flows really easily, except for the line about kids and the ice cream truck. and i also suggest that the line that goes 'Brown, young puppies run around with no cares' might be edited a bit to 'Brown, young puppies run around without a care' as it flows better and more naturally then. good job!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 16 Years Ago



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K. N. Graf
K. N. Graf

New Oxford, PA



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