I Just Keep Walkin'

Try it some time

Go right a head look at me weird. You know what send me mean texts do it I dare you if you think you better then me have a reason. Last time I checked we were all equal as in everyone is the same. With a matter of fact if you became president you would still be equal with me. Now I am laughing because your face is red and I'm inside you head. I used to hate government related things but they are great back up. While your sending me those texts I'm getting an education and living my life as fat as a pig. Would you rather tell lies about me or leave me alone? I like B look if you don like me don't talk to me. To be honest I don't want to talk to you. Point taken , now who is better? NO ONE

Author's Note

It makes sense

Reviews

[Heyns]

Great point! As Gandhi said, "an eye for an eye, leaves the whole world blind."

But FYI your grammar is a bit off, and punctuation would give this passage a bit more emphasis and assist in flow. This would make it easier to read. Before you publish step back and separate yourself from the emotions that drive the piece and review to make sure it conveys your feelings as close to exactly as possible.

Content is compelling, just try to look at it from a first time readers perspective and then you'll know what to do. Excellent potential!