Wrong side

Wrong side

A Poem by MYSELF
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Its about decisions taken to bear more pain from the society in nearby times in hope of having satisfaction and happiness to the longer run

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WRONG SIDE

Hopes all shattered, the rays are all scattered
Bewildered by the wind, the tornado turns in
Sadness holds to me, kicking forces to be free
Losing the time to repent and remorse
I already rode a conflicting horse
Sad it is to be, still holding the hope to me

Love is what we desire
Still there is a lot more that ads up to the attire
Money, society, culture
This is what I have ruptured
Putting the life to stake again
Listening this time to the Brain
I know I have the wrong choice
But this is what says my inner voice
Now letting go of everything I have
This time it’s not me I have

Let’s give this a try
And hope someday it fits to the good bye

© 2011 MYSELF


Author's Note

MYSELF
Not much of a writer neither do I have any knowledge...its just thoughts that keep popping up and I write them down....

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Really liked the Hindi poem in your About Me,and liked your own poem too,you have chosen an internal rhyme scheme in nearly every line,sometimes in the next line.
Good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


an interesting way of thinking,
ty for sharing,
you could easily make this in a poem,
take up the challenge

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is well done ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow...great insight and deep profound thoughts....and wisdom is excellent too :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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MYSELF
MYSELF

Jaipur, Jaipur, India



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When it comes to telling about myself, m always in a state of dilemma. I am often confused by the different sets of people who have judged me differently and have developed versatile kind of thinking.. more..

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