I LOVE YOU

Thoughts put together for a loved one without whom life is not imaginable. life has been cheerful and the person is totally in love with a gal. A simple poem just to show emotions.

I LOVE YOU

 

In the morning the sun show bright

All I remember is your hugging me tight

I open my eyes to see a new light

All I remember is our last night fight

 

It’s not that you don’t love me though

And these small fights don’t hurt me you know.

We can change things if together we go

Being by your side makes me eternally glow.

 

Your love for me is my life’s attire

To give you immense love is my life’s desire.

In my heart, beneath my skin

You will always find my love, a romantic fire.

 

All I want is to be with you,

What make me happy is only you.

To be with you is a pleasure of mine

To have you in my life is just so divine.

 

I care for you and I let you know

Baby, please never leave me and go.

For you, is my life’s only desire

Without you my dreams are on fire.

 

For all the reasons so far not true

All I give you a reason to be with you

For baby you may or may not believe it to be true

But its just you and only you

To whom I say I LOVE YOU

Author's Note

These lines were written to conceive the thinking from a close friend of mine and indicating to what he has been thinking after he met a girl with whom he fell in love.
Hope you people like it

Reviews

[P.S.]

Feels personal and in that way it is beautiful.

[Linear]

The message is loud and clear, perhaps a little to many of the simple rhymes, like mike said to spike because he didn't like to fight etc etc, but never-the-less a most enjoyable poem of love.

[Thea]

Beautiful poem! Nice ending too... :))

[stars are far]

This is so great poem i loved the showed and the expressed love in this ..
amazing piece indeed :)

[prodicallife]

Myself

Another piece of self relating work. Wowwwthat was so pure, so soft.
The flow of wprds was so beautifull.I loved it

To mention the last para took my complete attention and i just swimmed with the emotions. This is so true.

Well done!!
Keep up the good work

Regards
PRODICAL

[dieuxsansculte]

"To have you in my life is just so divine."

I love that line. That's just the way love is supposed to be.

Beautiful.

[Black]

It is really nice,
nice wording too,
nice work