LIFE IS JUST NOT FOR GETTING GRAVED

This popped up in my mind when I was dipressed and then thought why was I blessed with life....adn all that came to me was this... Do read hope you like it...

Life is jst not 4 getting graved

its a beautiful amazing thng

full of sunshine day

sumtyms may b high or low

ur spirit will 4evr flow

life is a quater mile

live fast before u die

u may find it wierd

but its nt true

its most simple but alwayz seem complex 2 u

d more u try 2 learn d more u 4gt

den y waste ur tym in hate n regret

dont search 4 thngs 2 b perfect

spread luv n joy n let evry1 suspect

hw cn 1 b so happy al through

den jst smile n say its just bcz f u

turn ur surroundings 2 b new

keep high n liv ur way thru

luv is ol u shud knw

den y fear death b4 u go

let ur anger n rage low

n feel light n let urself glow

enlighten urself wid luv u knw

n u'll make urself wrthwile f odrz knw

n u'll find d happiness in evrythng u knw

so better live ur lyf wid d sunshine day

as lyfz nt jst being getting graved one day

Author's Note

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Thank you

Reviews

[Linear]

I think written in english it would have been easier to read, for the youths of today I guess it will read just fine, but I'm old and english.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Just dig the style and lingo used, gr8 :)

[Black]

This could easily be a poem of mine.

I mean with the word choice and all ,
a great poem.

Regards
Black

[dieuxsansculte]

"Enlighten yourself with love."

Great line.

Another very good write. I like your poetry, and I think you have a lot of good ideas and thoughts.

I just wish you'd take the time to write them out. The shorthand you use is very disconcerting, and it makes reading difficult for an old guy like me.

But don't let any criticism from me stop you from writing the way you want. In the end you only have to satisfy yourself.

[stars are far]

this is so great
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