Trees

they billow in the breeze,
while giving life to you and me.

day and night,
they work their might.

though we neglect them every day,
they give us life anyway.

Reviews

[-inactive now-]

Trees breathe so the rest of the creatures in the world can too.
You conveyed that flawlessly..

[cassandra ziemba]

thank you very much

[-inactive now-]

You're welcome

[Ashley Arita]

Great poem! I love the ending part there. It's a very sweet and simple poem. I would say to put more similes or metaphors or more descriptions, but that would ruin it. I think it's perfect the way it is. Good job!

[cassandra ziemba]

thank you very much! im glad you like it!

[Ashley Arita]

Your welcome!