![]() 01: Sad Day in the HoodA Chapter by Debbie Tract![]() Mistreated Aidan Strong is excited to wake up on his birthday, in hopes that his family might be decent to him today. Unfortunately, he botches it up, and trouble ensues.![]()
It was almost a perfect summer day. The sky was bright blue and there were little to zero clouds. It was especially nice on Gretagrena Street, a pristine little avenue with tall, modern white houses lined against the smoothly-paved road. Every lawn was freshly cut and every driveway parked with clean and shiny cars that looked like they’d been purchased that same day in late June.
Camden House, otherwise known as House 12, was one of the model houses on the street. It was always clean, and the owners always seemed well-behaved. There were three lovely family members -- Mr. Wallace Strong, a wealthy commodities trader, was tall, well-built, and conservative of his money. Ms. Nancy Lewis-Strong, the housewife, was thin and tall with a wide smile and long black hair. Their son, Mason, was nine years old -- he was nearly always positive and walked with purpose. Almost every parent on the street envied his mother and father. They were perfectly lovely people with a perfectly lovely life, to the outside. Aidan Strong was lying under the sofa, uncomfortable and rigid. He was the Strongs' second son. Aidan wasn’t known to the street because he was kept inside at all times, wasn’t allowed to tell anyone he existed, and wasn’t allowed to call his parents anything except their first names, like he was their student. Mr. Wallace and Ms. Nancy treated him terribly and used his presence as a sort of servant, but if anyone ever noticed him they would begin to pamper him. The lights flickered on. Normally he'd wait for whoever it was to leave, but today was a different day. A special day. His day. His birthday. So he popped up from underneath and frowned at what he found. He had been hoping it was Mr. Wallace, since he was the nicest of them all. Of course, he was still profoundly awful and terribly mean, but he showed the most signs of slight decency and weakness. Instead, he was looking at a tall, thin woman with straight black hair cascading her face, ending abruptly as though she'd cut a straight line across it. She was dressed very nicely, and continued to brush her cheeks with something Aidan didn't recognize. She didn't bother acknowledging him. "Good morning," said Aidan in a groaned way -- luckily, if the time came, he could blame it on drowsiness. He frowned. He'd never been taught to say more than good morning. "Er... Good morning, Ms. Nancy?" Aidan hadn't meant for it to come out as a question, but frankly, he didn't know how to put it any other way. "Thirty-seven birthdays. Thirty-seven entire birthdays and you've yet to remember one!" Ms. Nancy scowled at him. "That is all you have to say, isn't it?" He opened his mouth to say something, but closed it quickly, just to be careful. He probably should have said happy birthday, but he couldn't bring himself to with all the disappointment swirling in his gut. Luckily, she hadn't noticed, as she had gone back to grumbling and brushing her cheekbones. Aidan heard steps striding down the stairwell, and his father, Mr. Wallace, scowled deeply by way of greeting. “Well? A birthday wish?” “What?” Surely Mr. Wallace didn't think it was his birthday, too. He wasn’t that upset about it. It was all he knew, so he had nothing better to compare it to. When they arrived at the camera store, Aidan noticed the big banner on top of the building. PROMOSIS INTRODUCES NEW CAMERA SERIES: PROMOSIS FLICKER -- GET YOURS TODAY! Something about the Promosis Flicker series seemed so compelling --which was especially odd, since Aidan had never seen other six-year-olds with cameras. Well, except a few times, when he’d seen large groups of people huddling around a select few. The middle of the group would hold up their shiny new camera, and sometimes they would be his age. The weirdest thing about it was that each time it occurred, everyone involved wore an odd pin -- gold, with eight glass towers in a circular form, and it read Magnolia. The inside of the camera store was exactly what he imagined the word pristine meant. It was completely clean and new, with shiny white walls and glass windows that seemed like they had been bought, installed, and washed all the non-existent dirt the heck out, all that very day. Every camera and standing advertisement was neat and accurate down to the last pixel, and all of the assistants were well-dressed, hair styled perfectly and makeup that put every celebrity to shame. “Promosis Pictures Industry, and for the summer sale every camera on a yellow stand is forty-five percent off!” said the female assistant on their left, and even her voice seemed like it was pitched specifically for each syllable to sound magnificent. It was sort of creepy. “I’m sure we can find the perfect camera to suit your lifetime ahead of photogra --” The assistant stopped as she saw Mason and Aidan, and probably Mr. Wallace’s and Ms. Nancy’s age. She regained herself in less than a second. “-- phy needs. I’m Veronica Bennett, how may I be of service? “You got a birthday routine here?” asked Mr. Wallace gruffly. Veronica Bennett looked slightly baffled, and somewhat disturbed, before her eyes caught realization. “Ah, is one of your beautiful little boys here on a birthday? Wants to become a photographer when he grows up?” Aidan’s eyes flashed at the sound of it, although he’d never had an inkling before of wanting to be a photographer"never even held a camera. Veronica stepped back in surprise. She bent down on her knees to be eye-level with him. She said something quietly to him, and at first he couldn’t understand it. It sounded like gibberish -- possibly even a different language. But soon enough a translation washed over. Aidan froze at the word. It felt like a prick on his skin. He only came back to life when Mr. Wallace yanked him away from Veronica violently. “No, Miss Victoria Barbie or whatever your name was, and we most certainly do not know what a Mage is.” He looked around. “And it is not his birthday. It’s my wife’s.” Veronica’s perfect eyes didn’t move from Aidan, and they looked like they were almost shaking. Not from fear… From excitement. Anticipation. Like a long wait was finally over, and she could settle back into her coziness. “No, isn’t it his birthday, too? You’re six now, aren’t you?” He nodded, but Mr. Wallace placed his hand so forcefully on his head that it barely moved. “It is not his birthday, and he is only five. My wife is thirty-seven today and I’d like to see that she gets a proper birthday celebration!” Mason frowned at the situation, looking sour at all the attention Veronica was giving him. Aidan had to admit it gave him a shiver of pride. “Of course, sir,” said Veronica, ripping her eye contact with Aidan though looking mildly perplexed before going back to her perfect assistant character. She called over one of the male assistants and whispered something. The assistant left and Veronica turned to Mr. Wallace. “But I hate to inform you that the Promosis Pictures Industry does not have a birthday celebration routine, but if your wife is interested in photography, we’ll make sure she was the best camera suited for her needs.” When Mr. Wallace turned to say “Drat” under his breath, she mouthed to Aidan “washroom sink.” Aidan nodded slightly and tapped on his father’s shoulder. “Mr. Wallace?” he asked. “What now?” Mr. Wallace snapped, in the way that a parent does to a child, making him regret every speaking up. “Oh -- I was just wondering if I could go to the bathroom.” “Just get out of my sight, and get back here, quick. We’re going home to see what we can do with you.” Aidan nodded and raced to the sign that said Men’s Washroom. In the fourth sink from the left, he noticed a small piece of paper that read: Touch any camera on a white stand. I must be sure of something. It was an odd request, but since he didn’t see anything to lose, so he accepted. Plus, there was something about Veronica he trusted. He knew this could easily be a trap -- maybe she wanted to get someone in trouble and trap them for the extra credit. But something about her felt more like a friend than he’d ever felt. Someone who was on his side. It was nice. So he left the bathroom with the paper crumpled in his oversized shorts’ pocket, skipping toward whichever one he liked best. He went to the one that said Promosis Flicker -- all new in stock, BUY NOW!!! There was just something about a camera whose advertisement used three exclamation points. He touched the camera button, and for a second it seemed nothing would happen, and it was all a waste of hope. Hope that something interesting might happen to him -- something mystical and worth noting. That he might not be a waste of space. Veronica, who was dealing with the other Strongs, frowned in his direction, mouthing Twelve seconds, try again. Mr. Wallace noticed this and saw Aidan counting to twelve on his fingers. He had gotten to nine when his dad cried, “Boy, no!” Three left. “Don’t do it.” Two left. Sorry, Mr. Wallace, I have to do this. “Mom, is Aidan going to ruin something again?” One left. “I swear, boy, if you"” Aidan pressed his whole hand on the camera lens. It began shaking, as though it were experiencing its own earthquake. Then it rose unevenly, snapping itself into nine pieces before putting itself back together in a way that was a completely new camera, but much different. It ran for Aidan, maybe his hands, but he couldn’t tell with all the squinting and squealing in the room. It instead knocked his forehead, conking him out into a darkness he’d never experienced before. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When he woke up, he was back under the sofa at home. He heard the loud sound of a hammer against nails, hitting him from all sides of the room. It wasn’t until after a few minutes that he realized Mr. Wallace must have been trying to board him into the small space underneath the sofa. “Mr. Wallace?” “YOU THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU’VE DONE, BOY!” yelled Mr. Wallace, but he didn’t stop boarding him in. “YOU’VE RUINED YOUR MOTHER’S BIRTHDAY AND EMBARRASSED THE STRONG FAMILY NAME WITH YOUR SILLY ANTICS!” “But I didn’t do anything! I just touched"” “THINK ABOUT IT FOR THE NEXT FOUR DAYS! UNTIL THEN, NO MEALS, NO LIGHT, NOTHING! NOT UNTIL YOU TREAT US WITH THE RESPECT WE’VE GIVEN YOUR FOR FIVE DARN YEARS!” Aidan’s hands twitched, and he felt his eyes burn up with the same experience he felt whenever he looked straight into the sun, or a lightbulb. That was the last straw. He felt like his eyes were blazing, with an unbelievable type of pain. The place his eyes had stared were flat-out burned through the wood. He was too furious to even wonder how it was happening, but soon enough the wood Mr. Wallace had been hammering on was completely burnt away, nothing more than ash that Aidan could roll over. He jumped up, looking straight at his father before yelling, “I’M SIX!” He felt an uncontrollable burning behind his eyes as he gave Mr. Wallace the hardest glare in history. His father barely cowered, but it was enough to boost Aidan’s confidence. And, as Aidan learned later, his father had actually been the one who’d gotten it wrong. His mother’s birthday was two weeks after.
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Added on September 22, 2020 Last Updated on September 22, 2020 Tags: mistreatment, abusive, awful-parents Author![]() Debbie TractNew York City, NYAboutI'm Debbie, and I just really like writing. I do a lot of artsy stuff, too, I'm big in singing and acting. I came here because I'm perfecting a story and want a place to see if people might like it. I.. more..Writing
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