Without you

What do you do when your world's gone to hell

And it seems to be turned inside out?

Where do you go when the one that you love

Is gone and you can't figure it out?

What do you do when you know it's your fault

That he's causing you all of this pain?

And how do you survive when the guilt in your heart

Is making you go completely insane?

Why is it that seeing your face now at school

Is torture beyond what's compare?

And how can I get past this lie we call life

Without you to help me bare?

Reviews

[Wildecat]

A nice poem, it is difficult to lose the one we love, but sometimes we just have to cut our losses and move on.

[~angelalala~]

this is a deep & emotional poem. its beautiful. so many can relate to your feelings of hopelessness, & loneliness. "What do you do when you know it's your fault That he's causing you all of this pain?" so many times we blame ourselves for other people's actions. but love shouldn't be painful. good write.

[shinybluestars03]

Awesome poem.
It is hard to lose the one you love
especially when you both go to the same school
dont worry keep you head up high :)
Thanks for sharing
and keep on writing!

Best wishes

[MandarinOranges]

I wish I wrote anywhere near this good when I was in school. The easy way your words flow together makes for a beautiful read. Good form!!!