Whip

Whip=wip=work in progress. It's not about anyone in particular-don't flatter yourself. Any of you.

Your innocence is astonishing
not that in itself, your madness, too-
the common thread manifests itself
inside the eyes of a starving child.

 A conniving spirit rests beside
that cardiac treasure, lost amongst
lesser organs and emotions, and
conducting the though you retain the guise of simple
spirituality, I cannot
understand this malignant
concealment of

Reviews

[Jason Dyer]

ahhhh a cliffhanger. Intriguing. I like how you convey the "treasure".