Hello…this made it into my top 10 favourites and there were 84 submissions. It was really a pleasure reading this and it made me a little emotional just because I feel like you really captured the essence of what poetry is, for me anyhow!
“from passionate promise
to ache of inner storms”
…loved those lines, absolutely beautiful poem!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you again Mia. I am honoured to have made it into your top 10 and yes, considering the number .. read moreThank you again Mia. I am honoured to have made it into your top 10 and yes, considering the number of entries!
Hello…this made it into my top 10 favourites and there were 84 submissions. It was really a pleasure reading this and it made me a little emotional just because I feel like you really captured the essence of what poetry is, for me anyhow!
“from passionate promise
to ache of inner storms”
…loved those lines, absolutely beautiful poem!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you again Mia. I am honoured to have made it into your top 10 and yes, considering the number .. read moreThank you again Mia. I am honoured to have made it into your top 10 and yes, considering the number of entries!
This is a very powerful poem, word. (I've nicknamed you "word," hope that's ok.) I was impressed with the strength of your images. Poetry is a powerful tool, and depending on who is holding the pen, it can change the world for the better or the worse. Write on!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much for such a wonderful review Joyce! You're right, words can change the world(hopefully.. read moreThanks so much for such a wonderful review Joyce! You're right, words can change the world(hopefully for the better, but history wouldn't always agree)
Appreciate your review very much!
You have done a great job, very compelling, interesting and well written.
A poem like this is a lesson, because hope lives by each of us with eyes closed believing in the goodwill of others.. and your message is very clear that poetry is for rituals, Great job.
These words are wonderful! I can see the mystical dance between the native poet, the wolf and the hawk playing in the flickering and light cast by a playful fire. Both forces of light and dark weaving in and out of the forest edges, the trees capturing the light and waltzing them into shadows that will spin and vanish again with each new burst of sparks.
The poet sees with the inner spirit and inner eye, they scribe the song within the sand by the foot steps ever changing beneath them. Blessed by the sweat and tears of the emotions spilling from the fireflies.
An amazing piece of ink Dear Roolander! Much enjoyed!
Aaron - Wolfwind
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you ever so much Aaron. You are always there with a helpful hint and kind words and I apprecia.. read moreThank you ever so much Aaron. You are always there with a helpful hint and kind words and I appreciate your comments very much indeed.
The Wild Roolander lol
Now that is an honour Frieda and if I knew how to add favourite poem I would one of yours I commente.. read moreNow that is an honour Frieda and if I knew how to add favourite poem I would one of yours I commented on the other day!
11 Years Ago
Well deserved...ant's easy, on the right hand side, above Stats, there is your library, it'll say Re.. read moreWell deserved...ant's easy, on the right hand side, above Stats, there is your library, it'll say Read Request, Subscribe, Flag warning and your library, just choose where you want to put it, reading, favorites or general, thank you too....