Seasons

Leafs fall covering my tomb

Dark skies pouring down the tears of my doom

Flowers bloom doesn't lessen the gloom

The sun is shining but still they loom

Reviews

[AustinDF]

Not a bad poem but I feel like you're stretching too far for the rhymes. Your poem doesn't have to rhyme, and in my opinion, shouldn't unless it wants to be.

[Kasey Nichole]

Very simple and to the point poem, great job!

I loved the rhyme scheme. Continue writing I can't wait to read more of your work.

-K